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Hiccups
Oh, God, she's hiccuping again.
Each and every motion she makes is so sudden. There will be silence, which is shortly broken by a jarring "huck" of a sound. She'll clasp a hand to her mouth momentarily, blush, and then remove it, only to hiccup once more. It's so annoying.
'Let's watch movies together, it'll be fun.' Ha. What a load. It's not like watching Avatar was the most important thing in the world, but if watching Avatar is what's happening, then it needs to happen UNINTERRUPTED.
"Babe, eat some popcorn. Hiccups can't escape past a wall of buttery kernels."
OK, that has to shut her up-
Nope. She's still doing it.
God, what
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A Bubbly, Burping Bimbo
“Let me out of here!” Acacia shouted.
The brunette was in the middle of an empty room, her arms and feet restrained. She growled she tried to get free. The people who had offered her a job had drugged her, and when she had woken up, she was wearing a Playboy bunny suit. As she tugged at her restraints, a door opened. A strange little robot rolled into the room. It was an odd looking thing on wheels, consisting of an oval-shaped body and a robotic hand. Behind it, was a wagon filled with soda bottles.
Acacia watched as the weird robot ran over to her. It waved to her, beeping a greeting. Then, it reached into the wagon an
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Too Much !!!! (Part II)
(Caution: this story contains immense body inflation)
She looked back at me with a smirk on her face "Now then where were we" she asked as she slowly bends over to grab the hose of the tank while she patiently steps towards me. I do my best to wiggle and shake as much as i could trying to let her know that I refuse to be inflated anymore "mmm MMM mmm MMM" I tried to say with the other hose from the hand pump still stuck in my mouth. Once she makes it up to my blimped out body she grabs the hoses from my mouth and pulls it out "I'm sorry I couldn't hear you, what was that? she questioned in a sarcastic manner. It took me a minute to answe
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Writing someone into a story is an interesting endeavor. Writing a couple into a story is whole other level. You have to get a feel not just for two characters not of your own making, but for how they relate to each other as well. It took a goodly amount of time before I felt like I "got it" with these two.
Amusingly(to me, at least), I used Roger and Jessica Rabbit as a starting off point for crafting TLink and Stacky. It's not an exact fit, and it was just a starting point, but the resemblance is there. And the underlying dynamic works well for a story that's as random and unrepentantly silly as this one.
Thanks go to for reviewing the first draft and pointing out its deficiencies. I had a "Sheesh, how did I not see that?" moment when I got his feedback. Fixing it in a satisfactory way proved infuriatingly difficult, but it was well worth the effort. This was an exceedingly fun project to do, and I'm quite happy with the result.
Writing someone into a story is an interesting endeavor. Writing a couple into a story is whole other level. You have to get a feel not just for two characters not of your own making, but for how they relate to each other as well. It took a goodly amount of time before I felt like I "got it" with these two.
Amusingly(to me, at least), I used Roger and Jessica Rabbit as a starting off point for crafting TLink and Stacky. It's not an exact fit, and it was just a starting point, but the resemblance is there. And the underlying dynamic works well for a story that's as random and unrepentantly silly as this one.
Thanks go to for reviewing the first draft and pointing out its deficiencies. I had a "Sheesh, how did I not see that?" moment when I got his feedback. Fixing it in a satisfactory way proved infuriatingly difficult, but it was well worth the effort. This was an exceedingly fun project to do, and I'm quite happy with the result.
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nice concept here